tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9011724735883053489.post7737282834755758958..comments2012-12-02T17:45:49.313-06:00Comments on Nancy Nelson EDM 310 Blog: Blog Post #7Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11325000095148493238noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9011724735883053489.post-87910815124609022052012-10-20T14:44:43.045-05:002012-10-20T14:44:43.045-05:00Nancy,
I see that we have some spelling nazis al...Nancy, <br /><br />I see that we have some spelling nazis already visiting your blog. Hate to say it, but they're right. Although I wouldn't say that it's too bad. Here are a few I found: <br />"<b>substancial</b> amount of <b>informtion</b>" should be substantial and information<br />"they <b>experiecne</b> it" should be experience<br />"and <b>recieve</b> interactive" should be receive<br />"student PLE <b>ise</b> extensive and she has organized <b>is</b> very well" should be is and it, respectively<br /><br />Other than spelling errors and some grammar issues, which I'm not going to point out, I think you did a great job answering the question about connected learning and the teacher's role. <br />Bailey Hammondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17505691354665640718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9011724735883053489.post-43536454877379667232012-10-16T11:48:33.626-05:002012-10-16T11:48:33.626-05:00Hillary have already pointed out a few of your err...Hillary have already pointed out a few of your error.here are few more that she didn't catch. In your second paragraph first sentence the word becomeing need to be correct to becoming. Drop the "E". No One is a prefect writer and we all make error.The best way that I deal with them is just to proof read your blog. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04209331601215902145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9011724735883053489.post-30399616103154892962012-10-15T14:29:32.865-05:002012-10-15T14:29:32.865-05:00Your post about the networked student was very wel...Your post about the networked student was very well written and informative. However, I didn't see any mention of the role of the teacher in your first paragraph or any mention of the responsibility in which the student gains through this type of learning. I think you could've gone into deeper detail with your summary paragraph. I do agree with you on the blended education. It doesn't have to be so extreme in either direction. I plan on doing a healthy mix as well.<br /><br />I think you could've put more effort into your PLE paragraph based on looking at your other work. You're very vague in the description and in your reaction. I also found 3 spelling mistakes. I hate to be a stickler, but I think you could do better.Hillary Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07676595041290156091noreply@blogger.com